Friday, April 21, 2017

Character Analyses for Ptielieren and Bieyshiealelleinue

The world of the Vow Unbroken series is revealed through the perceptions of the various characters within it.  While there are a great many characters that exist in passing and have various levels of significance, a few key individuals are introduced in the Prequel book Borehole Bazaar.  While a complete list of all such names appears in the published text, this is a more detailed analysis of each of the most important souls.  In theory, it will be updated biweekly.  Fan art is greatly appreciated.  To read up to the first five chapters of source text, please click HERE 


Ptielieren


Ptailierensylvcois X'Faineinzealeanii is the protagonist and regards himself by the truncated "Ptielieren."  Uncivilized or Hard races refer to him by the handle "Xiezjiit," which is the name given a kind of digested pig stomach that is utterly unpalatable yet is, technically, edible.

This is actually a very complex character who only hints at his past history in the first few books, but it can be gleaned that he came from wealth and privilege and has a familial obligation to defend a specific, if somewhat distant, heir to the Spiral Throne.  Beyond that, he is heavily conflicted with the necessities of securing survival for himself and his ward and the implicit shame in capitulating to his captors.   His very lack of thoughts with regard to his kin, except as pertained to those few who made themselves available immediately following his father's death, shows a concrete disconnect and lack of general familial warmth.

Ptielieren's family life is strained, with many funerals having occurred in the past four decades.  His mother and two of his matrilineal half-sisters survive, as does a distant half-brother from his father's line, and a few cousins make their presence known throughout the series, though, again, his interaction with these souls in both limited and strained, usually revolving around some manner of business and not a desire on either party to share company.  His musings and memories do not usually touch on shared family events, either, and he instead finds direction and a grounded past in the jobs, duties, and titles he has dedicated himself to.  This appears to be widely regarded by his kin as the proper and acceptable course, though the estranged of his two surviving sisters would appear to disagree.

Because Ptielieren's sense of self-respect and self-value stems from institutions which are both wildly racist and classist, the transition to living as a very low-ranking member of such an ill-perceived society is incredibly difficult for him to come to terms with.  His ideas regarding family and social constructs are almost entirely based on abstract and absolute codes and mores.  This leads to his initial culture shock and the anger he feels at himself, at his fellow captives, and at his captors.

In truth, the institutions that most formed the groundwork for Ptielieren's view of the world around him were his time as a gardener and his time as a prison guard.  Training for and taking the role of a personal bodyguard for the Royal Line was internalized as an extension of his job in the prisons, though in an elevated setting.  As such, he has never allowed a familiar or convivial relationship to develop between himself and his ward.  The byproduct is a pair that are cold, detached, and professional in the presence of each other and are utterly inexperienced at offering the kind of emotional support that could otherwise have helped both to find a sense of place and, by extension, a sense of peace in this hostile new environment.

Bieyshiealelleinue


This character is the most well-equipped of the prisoners with regard to finding a place in this new society.  While technically a distant relation to Ptielieren, he did not come of age in even moderate wealth.  Instead, the first two centuries of his life required that he scrape and fight to keep his family in home and food.  He developed his ability to fight through little back-alley contests and honed his reputation as a creature worthy of taking a ward through offering his services as a formal tutor for any number of lesser families, leveraging his affiliation as best he was able.  

In the course of these efforts and difficulties, he developed a highly cavalier outlook with regard to other races.  While he is not innocent of elitism and a stiff variant of racism,  Still, despite his constant struggles and monumental efforts to attain a social rank in keeping with the main line of the family despite every instance of difficulty, said difficulties had managed to cap his potential growth.  He fell into a deep depression at around his two hundred and fiftieth year and took to spending his off time in taverns and places of filth, finding in said company an absence of scrutiny that was almost an antidote to the rigors of trying to impress the entrenched gentry.  


It was during this period that an assassination attempt went horribly wrong, causing the coach being struck to dart, driverless, headlong into the heart of the Granite District, a region known for its instability and the propensity for racially motivated violence against Civilized individuals.  The heir’s ward died at the hands of the assassin, and the assassin died at the hands of a band of street thugs as they both pulled free of the ruined carriage.

The commotion was enough to draw Bieyshiealelleinue from a dingy bar.  Seeing the scene and understanding in an instant that the woman was in danger, he lunged forward and dragged her down dozens of back alleys until he could secret her at his home and find what had happened.  This, in turn, led to a series of dire events including the death of his mother, the incarceration of his father, and the purge of his neighborhood block as one split decision was chased by another.


By all logic, the pair should not have survived.  However, six weeks later, when he managed to present her again to the court, she was accepted.  He was not.  

What precisely happened after her readmittance to court was never shared, but Bieyshiealelleinue has seen the scars and heard whispers of the political fallout.  Two years had passed when a halfling courier presented a letter to the corner of an attic he shared with a family five human-elf hybrids.  Bieyshiealelleinue responded to the summons with trepedation, wearing the better of his two outfits and wishing he could present a better face than this for the formal disavowel of relation to the core X'Faineinzealeanii line.  In his mind, there could be no other reason for such a summons.

Instead, he was hurried to a room adn the rites of initiation were performed quickly and in secret.  The Diaellii Phae'vael burned deep into his flesh and he felt an instant kinship with the woman he was to guard.  He was then ordered to take his newly appointed ward on a tour of the neighboring nations and to remain abroad for some thirty or forty years.  Whatever scandal had been caused was silenced and sealed, though day to day adventures overrode any particular need or desire to share.

For the pair, fleeing the city was a practiced tradition.  While living as a serf to bugbears is not ideal, Bieyshiealelleinue is confident that it is a temporary condition.  He worries over the welfare of his ward almost to the point of obsession, as all the good and vibrant years of his life have been devoted to keeping her safe and keeping them both well-adjusted to new scenarios.  Secretly, he knows that, once they are old enough to retire from the social world, he and she will take vows of devotion and pair off to spend their eternities as one.




Saturday, June 11, 2016


     

      I firmly believe that no person’s situation is hopeless until their breath ceases. Borehole Bazaar reflects this philosophy. It is the first of a series, each book of which focusses on an aspect of the protagonist’s personal development and growth.
      This is, at its heart, a story about surviving in an abusive, hostile environment when both fighting and fleeing are not valid options. Bugbears, elves, goblins, halflings and humans are players in this tale, but the story, at its heart, is a vision of honest truth. The protagonist, Ptielieren (pronounced t̬ɑɪ el ɑɪ eəʳ ɪn), is fleeing political unrest in a caravan of humans, elf mutts (human elf hybrids), and others of his own most illustrious race when said caravan is overcome by an ambush. We pick up in the aftermath, as Ptielieren learns the folly of arrogance at the fists of his captors.
      Abuse is a tricky subject and it's not often talked about.  Oh, the term is bantered here and there, and it's either with pity that someone experienced it or with a kind of distant triumph that folks talk about survivors.  But survivor usually implies that the person got out, and, failing to escape, the person must either be pittied or there must be something wrong with them.  That has been my experience, and it is what I've observed in other folks who've been through rough
patches.  Now, on the outside looking in, this may seem perfectly fine, but sympathy can be a whole lot more damaging than apathy here.  When you're on the inside looking out, it never seems that bad.  A story or two, like the time when I was working two jobs and sleeping on a friend's couch while I pretended not to see the wild rats running in the living room, I mean, to hear it, it's pretty rough.  To live it, well, it was more humorous than anything else, a kind of background dread and no more damaging than knowing one of my best friends was sleeping on park benches and not being able to do a darn thing about it.  The minute someone said "oh, that's so sad.  I'm sorry you had to live through that," I began to question my sense of worth.  So, for that and with the intent to honor those of my friends who have gone through much, much worse and shared with me their experiences, this book explores the kind of abuse that doesn't have one convenient bad-guy to destroy or someplace safe to reach.
      The names in this tale are tied to the races that hold them.  Just as two individuals of wildly different origins would have difficulty pronouncing each other's names, so too do individuals of different races.  In keeping with this, races other than human often have foreign sounding names, while human hybrids (the racially charged slur "mutt" is used heavily by the protagonist) may have human, foreign or entirely original names (such as Sunrise or Tankard).  Often, longer or weirder named individuals are given nicknames.  Bieyshiealelleinu might be called Bayou and Boloborolo might be called Rolo.  The kind of grudging acceptance is not usually felt, but hearing a name said properly, that brings an upwelling of emotions and a sense of US that otherwise would not have developed.
      Ultimately, this is a story of hope, of surviving and adapting to a very harsh world, it is a story about moving to a culture that is unfriendly and unforgiving, and it is a story about finding something, anything, to use first to float, then to swim.  In later books, this something even helps Ptielieren to metaphorically fly.